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Solidisen
Jul 1st, 2004, 10:31:10 AM
GE Solidis: "It's more ISB to co-op someone than to plant them because it is more effective. People don't talk frankly in front of newbies but they will talk freely in front of someone they know and trust. Perhaps Tear or Esalis can set up the recruitment part. This is their field afterall."
sIlancy: the link I sent you is for character history o_O
GE Solidis: "Why not start a thread to establish your character as a pilot- say blasting pirates or something- then when Tear and/or Esalis are avaliable they can step in and recruit you to the ISB."
GE Solidis: - Tiberius Anar
sIlancy: just start a thread in recruitment then
GE Solidis: you sure i can make 1 there?
sIlancy: yes

Soo here it is...

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Medal boots hit the floor, echoing the sound into the cold air. A cape hung around the bulky figure reviling only his boots below his cloak and his head. The figure walked up the ramp to the spaceport’s hanger.

Figure: “Want a job done, don’t hire a Bounty Hunter. Because they’ll only screw it up. You have to do it your self.”

He passed at a holonet panel. It was broadcasting a news update… “New information has just came in, retired ISB general Janis Bavsten was found dead in his apartment. Imperial authorities are now on the hunt for…”

The figure smiled and turned to continue his trip.

Figure: “That’s the last. My past is finally erased from history. Now all that’s left is for myself to rejoin the Empire.”

He reached his destination, just a little late. An Escort Shuttle was being raided my a small group of thugs, …His Escort Shuttle.

“Cease your actions and step away,” the figure said in a calm low voice that was just enough for the criminals to hear.

Thug: “back away bud, you don’t want to get hurt do you?”

Figure: “Heh, its you that will get hurt if you do not comply.”

Thug 2: “you asked for it”

The second Thug pulled off a weapon from his back, and pulled the trigger. Unleashing a blast of fire towered the figure. He raised his arm to his head, and was engulfed in a blaze of heat. Then the steam rose and the cape was gone. Burned to ash be the flame. The figure moved his arm from in front of his face to his side. With the cape gone all could see that the man wore a full body armor suit. The black armor running from his toe to his neck gave of a glossy shine. It was that of the long since diminished Storm Commandos.

Pulling a knife from his side the throw it into a Thugs neck. The other Crooks brought up blasters and opened fire. The figure ducked to the side, bringing up his own blaster to bear. Firing 7 quick shots he killed the 5 lowlifes.

After that last shot 3 Stormtroopers along with an imperial officer ran up the ramp to the hanger.

“Freeze” 1 of the troopers shouted. “Drop your weapon” The man did as ordered. “who are you?” the officer asked.

The figure smiled as he razed his hand. “Solidisen"

Solidisen
Jul 13th, 2004, 03:35:31 PM
(OOC: i was told to start my players history... so i did, i need an ISB or Navy officer topost here... i think i have waited to long)

Loklorien s'Ilancy
Jul 13th, 2004, 04:57:55 PM
ooc - I would recommend PMing either Esalis (http://www.sw-fans.net/forum/member.php?s=&action=getinfo&userid=3595) or Tear (http://www.sw-fans.net/forum/member.php?s=&action=getinfo&userid=3758). Both have been busy lately, but I'm sure that they would be more than happy to help you out and participate if you asked them. I'm not sure about Tear's status, but Esalis is usually very nice about stuff in general and willing to help. I know she's around, so just PM her.

Solidisen
Aug 25th, 2004, 04:58:33 PM
(OOC: i started my post here, as i was told to on 07-01-04 12:31 PM... now its 8/25/04 ...what happened????
:mad
and i ever going to be able to join, if some one wants me gone, say so and i'll leave.... but so far i have heard nothing. )

Jarek T'chort
Aug 25th, 2004, 06:43:50 PM
Originally posted by Solidisen
(OOC: i started my post here, as i was told to on 07-01-04 12:31 PM... now its 8/25/04 ...what happened????
:mad
and i ever going to be able to join, if some one wants me gone, say so and i'll leave.... but so far i have heard nothing. )

Hold up a second.

A few things -

Try not to say



Figure: “Heh, its you that will get hurt if you do not comply.”

Thug 2: “you asked for it”

Rather,


The figure loomed menacingly over the thugs, his face darkened.

"Heh it is you who will be harmed if you do not comply."

The lead thug sneered, his lip curling upwards.

"You asked for it."

It reads better that way, also run your posts through the spell check at the bottom of the reply form.

Your roleplaying is pretty good and the Sovereignty is always looking for new, able members. Consider yourself recruited Solidisen. For now, continue this roleplay and try to implement the changes I have stated.

I'm sure Inquisitor Esalis or Colonel Tear will reply asap, try private messaging them.

Welcome to the Imperial Sovereignty.