Chill Room

[Razvan]

Razvan walks into the chill room and sees all the jacozies

He drops his clothes ( except boxers:D )

then jumps in a jacozie

[Dark Daylight]

Dives in the pool fully clothed wooohoo now this is the relaxation you need after a hard days work for the order.

[Warlock]

This is the OOC forum, you know.

[Dark Daylight]

yup i know but i was using an example.

[James Prent]

Here's an example:

Jacozie is actually spelled JACUZZI.

Use spell check so people know what the heck you're trying to say. To be honest, I generally can't read any of your (Dark Daylight, Sith Lord Homer, Lord Dakar, and Razvan) posts because of the misspellings, lack of punctuation, and general horribleness.

All of you, PLEASE use your education. If you haven't gotten one, I apologize.

[Dark Daylight]

I beg to pardon you, as i have been informed that i have not got terrible spelling mistakes and if i do please either get the spell checker corrected or refer me to where it happened so i can correct it.

[imported_Jacali Danner]

And capitalize, guys!! But, it's true. I have a very hard time reading anything from Homer or Daker, especially.

[Je'gan Olra'en]

No, Mister Daylight's spelling is fine. A bit of work on capitalization, bud, and you're good to go.

[Dark Daylight]

Thank you Je'gan much appreciated :D

[Makoto Neo]

Just a little pet peeve of mine, but there are probally others who would agree with me: Try using commas & periods in your writing, it really helps out others who go to read them. ^_^;

[Dark Daylight]

No problem.

[Razvan]

Razvan scratches his head

"Education???"

lol

hey chill out its not my fault i cant spell 1/10 things, sheesh, i bet you make more mistakes James prent

but i must admit it was funny the way you said that
:
Here's an example:

Jacozie is actually spelled JACUZZI.

[Dasquian Belargic]

Capitalize. Punctuate.

http://www.spellcheck.net/

[Droo]

Originally posted by Razvan
Razvan scratches his head <-- This is an IC response not only to something OOC but in an OOC forum. Needs a period.

"Education?" <-- No speech marks neccessary. Only one question mark required.

lol <-- No period, no nothing here. You should've used a smilie instead.

hey chill out its not my fault i cant spell 1/10 things, sheesh, i bet you make more mistakes James prent <-- See below for corrections. Absolutely awful.

but i must admit it was funny the way you said that
: <-- Capitalise and colon should be on the same line as the text above.
Here's an example:

Jacozie is actually spelled JACUZZI.

Correction: "Hey, chill out. It's not my fault I can't spell 1/10 things. Sheesh! I bet you make more mistakes, James Prent."

Fixed and yes, it is your fault and no, she doesn't make half as many mistakes as you. The quality of your writing is inexcusable as far as I'm concerned.

[Dark Daylight]

Thank you Dru.

[Lady Vader]

Ok, Razvan, insulting others isn't helping your cause, let alone not admitting that your spelling/punctuation is terribly lacking. This kind of behavior is starting to run my patience dangerously thin.

Be nice, or something drastic might happen, capice?

[Dark Daylight]

>D You heard the lady.

[Razvan]

Wow wow wow wow wow!

Wait a minute, I am sorry for whatever "I" have done but before you go any further I want you to know that it wasn't actually me, it as my sister she got onto my account through the automatic login thingy and she said that she saw nice pictures here, believe it or not but the only time I came on was when I came to my training post i didnt realise the other ones.

(ohh my sister liked the cat woman pic :) )

dont worry it wont happen again

[Dark Daylight]

Look your still doing it!

The word I is a capital not a lower case letter "i" should be "I" and should all the other I's.

"anyfurther" should have a space between the word's becoming "any further"

"didnt" should have a ' in it making it "didn't" if you have difficulty with this then please don't shorten word's type them fully "did not". ( Same applies with "dont" should be "don't" or "do not".

"loggin" is spelt "login"

"worrie" is spelt "worry"

And where are your capitals and full stops?

[AmazonBabe]

So, Daylight... are you a Sith or Grammar teacher? :p

Razvan, I'll buy that your sis got on the comp, but the fact that you (and your sis, apparently) are still having probs with spelling/puncuation are still an issue (and I must admit, you both have the same writing technique).

And I do believe you meant "whoa" in place of your multiple "wow's".

[Droo]

:lol

That tickled me.

[Lady Vader]

*Tickles him some more.* >D

[Dark Daylight]

:lol nice one Amazon.

I just happen to be top set in my english studies. That's why I was correcting, I have also been asked to help them.

[Dark Daylight]

Hey Amazon how about i become the sith grammar teacher.

[Lady Vader]

*snickers* Looks like someone beat me to the punch. :lol

[Dark Lord Dyzm]

*Lurk*

And I'll be gone before you can reply! MAWAHAHAHAHA...

So what has everyone been up to?

[Lady Vader]

Up to? Up to?? :lol

It's all summed up in the SSC. Just go lurk there and see.

[Dark Daylight]

I can't :(