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Finrod Ar-Feiniel
May 12th, 2003, 10:22:46 AM
There's a certain trouble with names. Oh everything's fine and dandy if you have a plain, normal name, like Jake Jones or Sarah Simms. The trouble comes if you're a Thornycroft Banderbee, or Bellenfoot Jiggernaut. Or Finrod Ar-Feiniel. Yes, names are troublesome things.

"'Ello Finrod! 'Ow are you t'day?"

The unfortunately named little boy ignored the calls of his schoolmates and kept walking down the bustling path. He was perhaps nine, with a crew cut and delicate frame who today wore a very prominent scowl. It wasn’t his fault that his father’d had such an odd and out of place last name. Nor was it his fault that his mother had named him on the spur of the moment, her inspiration coming to her in a dream. After all, had he been around at the time of the decision, Finrod certainly would not have allowed it.

“’Ey…Finnyrod…Dun’t walk away so! We only wan’ t’ play!”

He ignored them, the lucky stuck-up kids—Ron, Davi, Jerrett…normal. This was a daily routine and though he had grown accustomed to it, it still hurt. Sticks and stones may break my bones but words will never hurt me…what a load of bullocks. Words did hurt, and Finrod was constantly battling them. Sometimes he wondered about his parents.

“Naw it’s not p’lite t’ jes’ walk away like tha’ Finrod! I’ve got a mind t’ teach y’ a lesson!”

The boy quickened his pace but it made little difference. A rock was flung from behind and struck the back or his head, cutting it. Finrod gasped and put his hand over the small wound. It stung fiercely and he broke into a run, the other boys in quick pursuit, looking for some safety anywhere. His current residence was still some distance away and he’d never make it. Breathing quickly with fright, Finrod dodged pedestrians, his school satchel banging against his knobby knees. Just when he was about to give up a man opened a door and exited a restaurant of some kind. Finrod took the opportunity and ran inside.

His school uniform was a mess. The blazer was dirty; the blue and gold tie askew, and the navy shorts were covered in dust and grime. Finrod didn’t pay much attention though; he’d always hated the uniform. It looked awful on him, like it didn’t quite belong. He felt like that often. Never quite in place with everybody else. Finrod had been in foster care for as long as he could remember and he couldn’t count the number of times his foster parents had innocently remarked how different he was.

“Fairylike, ‘e is. A real odd one.”

One foster-mother had said. Whatever that meant.

Panting, the young boy looked around, trying to find a place to sit. For some reason or the other, Ron and his cronies hadn’t followed him in. The place was crowded and it didn’t look as though he would find a seat. Sighing, Finrod put his black leather satchel on the floor and sat on it. His head was throbbing but it seemed as though it had stopped bleeding. No doubt the short spikes of white-blonde hair were matted with the thick dried blood.

Yes, names were troublesome things.

Kwiet Ideya
May 12th, 2003, 12:17:18 PM
Thmp thmp thmp

A row of small stars appears at the boy's feet, followed by a thud and a crash across the room. Kwiet, in his usual, must-be-cool manner, has acquired the kid's attention. It's rare to find another child in the Bar and Grill, though they are certainly welcome by all the patrons, especially the bartender. The six year old stands up, rubbing the back of his head where he hit it and goes to get his stars.

"Hi. Who're you?"

Finrod Ar-Feiniel
May 12th, 2003, 12:22:53 PM
Finrod's gaze remained fixed on the stars, curiously. Then, as if his interest in them had dissipated, he looked up at the other child. Of course, the first thing this other boy had asked, was his name. The dreaded conversation starter.

"Hi."

Finrod stood up, brushing off the seat of his pants. He looked at Kwiet uncertainly.

"I'm Finrod Ar-Feiniel."

Kwiet Ideya
May 12th, 2003, 12:38:47 PM
Kwiet scrunches his nose up. That's worse than being misconstrued as "Quiet Idea".

"M'name's Kwiet Ideya. Kweet Ee-day-ah"

He pronounces his name with such exaggerated clarity that it could be almost comical.

Finrod Ar-Feiniel
May 12th, 2003, 01:23:28 PM
"Kweet?"

Finrod repeated, trying to make sure he pronounced it right. He'd never met any Kwiet's before. Smiling, Finrod tried to make an innocent comment, not thinking ahead to the implications the other boy might mistake him to have.

"Sorta like the sound a bird makes?"

He stared at Kwiet, waiting for a response to his silly comparison.

Kwiet Ideya
May 12th, 2003, 01:30:49 PM
"No!"

He can't think of any animals that make sounds like Finrod, so he can't trade him insult for insult. But he can insult something else.

"Stupid. Birds don't say Kwiet."

Finrod Ar-Feiniel
May 12th, 2003, 01:34:08 PM
"They do to! Kweet, Kweet! Kweet, Kweet!"

Finrod had been teased about his name for his whole life and so theoretically he should have been the last one to reciprocate in like fashion. Of course, theory's weren't always proved true. On a day like today, when he'd had enough, the boy didn't care enough to stop when he should have.

Frowning, Finrod put his hands on his hips.

"You take it back! Take it back now or else...or else you'll r'gret it!"

Kwiet Ideya
May 12th, 2003, 01:39:17 PM
"I'm not scared of you! You can't beat me!"

His Daddy and Grampy Friend taught him to fight good! And th' other mommies and daddies taught him stuff, too!

"You're as dumb as your name!"

Finrod Ar-Feiniel
May 12th, 2003, 01:46:48 PM
The lads mouth dropped open.

"I am not dumb! And...And neither is my name! You're the dumb one...birdboy!"

Fin, who had never before stood up for himself, felt exhilerated. Though his defense was weak (his name was stupid) it was still a defense.

Kwiet Ideya
May 13th, 2003, 10:26:50 AM
Bird boy? That's the last straw for Kwiet. In the past he probably would have simply left it alone, and gone to a corner or something to cry to himself or find someone to comfort him, but it's been months since he left the church house, and under the loose care of Ansatsu, Fiend, and the Lost Jedi, Kwiet's acquired quite the temper.

"Take it BACK!"

The boy pulls back and swings as hard as he can at Finrod's face.

Finrod Ar-Feiniel
May 13th, 2003, 10:36:17 AM
Kwiet's fist hit him square in the nose and Finrod let out a cry, mostly because he was surprised. Growling, the boy stood up and picked up his school case.

"YOU take it back!!"

Finrod swung the case and let go as it sailed toward Kwiet. Without waiting to see whether or not it had actually hit his newly aquired adversary, the lad tore off his blazer and tackled Kwiet, as he had learned in gym class.

Kwiet Ideya
May 13th, 2003, 10:51:31 AM
The tackle does it's job, but his daddy taught him a counter! Well...not really. Uncle Wei used the counter on his Daddy, and then Kwiet practiced it. It's alot harder to do to Finrod than to his practice dummy, and the boy doesn't fly like it does. Kwiet presses a foot to his opponent's stomach and pushes, throwing with his arms. Finrod lands on his back above Kwiet. The boys narrowly miss banging their heads, but Kwiet doesn't notice the close call. He's too busy getting up to fight.

Finrod Ar-Feiniel
May 13th, 2003, 11:47:28 AM
"Oomph!"

The bloodied nose was forgotton and the two boys hardly noticed that they're little scuffle had drawn attention from the clientele in the bar.

Finrod glared at Kwiet, but did nothing more. He didn't really know how to fight, he'd always been on the recieving end of the beatings.

"Take back what you said!"

He put his fists up in what he hoped was a threatening manner.

Kwiet Ideya
May 13th, 2003, 11:56:58 AM
"Nuh uh!"

The raised fists are a challenge to Kwiet, and the boy is willing to oblige. He's too mad to even think of the practice weapons on his belt, and so he punches again with an angered cry.

Finrod Ar-Feiniel
May 13th, 2003, 12:23:29 PM
Finrod ducked--it was more of a fall than anything, really-- and covered his face. His heart gave a little jump. This was not what he had expected going into the situation. What they showed on the holonetworks was far more graceful and orchestrated.

He clambered back up to his feet and swung wildly at Kwiet, missing by a mile. It was pathetic really, like watching a three-legged dog trying to run a marathon.

"Ahgh!"

Frustrated, Fin jumped at Kwiet again and wrapped his arms around the boy's head. He didn't know what exactly it was supposed to do, but at least he wasn't in the range of the boy's uppercut.

Kwiet Ideya
May 13th, 2003, 09:47:24 PM
Kwiet bends uncomfortably at the waist, struggling and flailing to free himself from the headlock. A few wild lashes manage to catch Finrod, though it's not half so effective as what he could do if he were free.

"LEGGO! LEGGOLEGGOLEGGOLEGGOLEGGO LEEEETTTTT GOOOOOO!"

Finrod Ar-Feiniel
May 14th, 2003, 08:46:06 AM
"No! OW! Take it back first!"

Finrod tucked his head lower so as to avoid any stray strikes and tried to pull Kwiet to the ground. However, he had forgotton about his case and somehow managed to trip over it and land with a thunk on his back, releasing Kwiet.

Staring up in surprise, Fin began to yell.

"Augh! Help!"

Kwiet Ideya
May 14th, 2003, 11:06:17 AM
Kwiet pounces on him, sending the case flying and rears back for a big punch.

"DON'T MAKE FUN OF ME!!"

Rasputin
May 16th, 2003, 05:32:04 PM
Kwiet's hand was stopped, and the kid was jerked backwards and off of Finrod. Holding Kwiet up about a foot in the air was a young man with long blue hair.

"Kids shouldn't fight."

Kwiet Ideya
May 16th, 2003, 11:29:36 PM
Kwiet lashes violently, eyes reddening visibly.

"SHUT UP! STAY OUTTA THIS! I DON'T NEED YOUR HELP AND YOU'D BEST NOT TRY TO STOP ME EITHER!"

Rasputin
May 17th, 2003, 10:33:03 AM
"How about no, if you want to fight do it outside, people are trying to enjoy their meals."

Rasputin's silver eyes narrowed into a glare, as he dropped Kwiet but kept a hand on his arm.

"Now how about you both agree to disagree, since well...Hearing your argument, both of you have really queer names."

Finrod Ar-Feiniel
Jun 2nd, 2003, 12:16:29 PM
Finrod, who had kept quiet up until this point, opened his mouth. Perhaps it was because of his newly found brashness, or perhaps simply a momentary inkling, that the little boy kicked Rasputin as hard as he could.

"M'name's not queer!"

In all honesty, the little boy didn't even know what queer meant...but he didn't like it. Widening his eyes angrily, Finrod pointed up at the man.

"You're queer!"

Kwiet Ideya
Jun 3rd, 2003, 10:00:09 PM
"YEAH!" Kwiet chimes in, pointing accusingly at Rasputin and flailing away. "We're alot cooler than you'd ever be!"

Rasputin
Jun 4th, 2003, 12:24:26 PM
Taking his hits, Rasp just sighs.

"You don't even KNOW what queer means do you?"

He gave both the kids a cockeyed look, "It means weird, and my names MUCH weirder than yours! So NYAH!" :mneh

Moving quickly Rasputin, pokes Kwiet square on the forehead, then grins.

"Wanna try and guess my name Mr. Kwiet?"