My first go at a story type thing!

[Helenias Evenstar]

http://www.sw-fans.net/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=29150

:D

I'm rather pleased with how it came out.

[Marcus Telcontar]

And she didnt tell me about the plot twist and is refusing to explain it now! :cry

But it's good shit to read. Recommended

[Xazor Elessar]

I KNOW WHAT THE PLOT TWIST IS! :D

Sorry, just had to throw that in there Marcus. At least -- I think that's what it is (that thing you told me a while back, Helenias!) HA! I kept it a secret and you'll never pry it out of me Marcus! :D

WOW! That's some awesome writing Helen! *huggles* It moved me to tears, made me laugh, made me actually fall into your story like I was living it myself but through your words.

That's really powerful -- wow -- I just don't know what to say! :eek

[Lion El' Jonson]

I know what to say...

That was so good my eyeballs have popped out of my skull and are now lolling uselessly about at my keyboard, dripping fluid all over the table.

It's...too...excellent...