Cadet Patton starfighter training

[Darth Viscera]

You are a sole TIE Fighter on patrol from your Imperial Battle Platform. You are 300 clicks out by visual scanning, and well out of sensor range of the battle platform. All of a sudden, a Flight Group (4 ships) of T-65R3 X-Wings pops out of hyperspace, and jams your communications.

You continue this RP now. Your reaction will determine how well you are deemed to be trained as of now, and ultimately how well you will be promoted.

If you're having some trouble, read the training posts of others, which should give you some insight.

[Dace Patton]

Dace is sitting in his small cockpit of the standard Imperial tie fighter no shield life, support, or hyperdrive. The only weapon are two forward mounted light cannons below the cockpit when the 4 x-wings come out of no where his quickly trys to send a transmission, but they had blocked his communacations too quickly. The 4 x-wings actavate there s-foils and break of into two groups to cut off a possible escape. Dace moves his small tie into position into a head on course with one of the groups of 2 x-wings the trageting computer beeps noisily as Dace has his traget lock, just then the x-wing also locks on as they both let out several shots but Dace talon rolls hard left barely avoiding a deadly bolts. The x-wing however was not as lucky and had been destoryed. The clumsy pilot not ready for such an attack. The second group was coming in hard right too his position, as the other x-wing of the group had been throw off course by the expolsion from the other x-wing. Dace tried his comm again with no luck as the other group of x-wings closed in little by little. Dace once again turns his tie around and begins the same maneverer as last time. This time however would be a little different he would come in a bit to the side and try and pick off both the x-wings at once. Dace is now in position the traget computer beeping very busy trageting the enemy ships, Then a loud beep he is locked on the x-wing as the x-wing has a lock as well. Dace turns his tie sideways as he and the x-wing open fire Dace knowing well that the x-wings laser cannons are not placed out enough to traget his small craft in this position the lasers pass by the hull of his ship the x-wings sabulizer had been hit, knocking the first x-wing into the second destorying them for they we're in tight battle formation. The last remaining x-wing had fully recovered and about to turn about to attack. Dace was not about to let him get behind him and turned about full in attemp to get behind him, he took a gamble and went high as the two craft fly though space at high speed Dace talon rolls once more the gamble works, as he pulls behind the enemy craft which is despertly trying to lost him Dace continues on traget still jamming the enemy ship transmissions so they may not call in other craft. At last a lock 4 bolts of energy leave the tie hammering into the near by x-wing destorying it. With his comm no longer jammed he sends a transmission to base. 4 T-65 x-wing fighters seen and destoryed returning to base to refuel.

[Darth Viscera]

Before I move you onto Ship training, I want you to work on your text format. Write that again, only this time, no run-on sentences. I want colons where they should be, commas where they should be, dashes and apostraphes where they should be. This isn't a race to post quickly. Your writing needs to look presentable, or people won't be able to understand what you're saying.

Sample:
Dace sat in the cramped cockpit of the standard Imperial TIE Fighter. There were no shields, life-support, or hyperdrives built into the craft. The only weapons to be found were two forward mounted light cannons below the cockpit. Suddenly, two X-Wings came streaking out of nowhere. Dace quickly tried to send a transmission back to his battle station, but the enemy ships had blocked his communications too quickly.

[Dace Patton]

Any better? I did have to race to post that I had to get off for a little bit and did not want to lose all that and retype it.

[Darth Viscera]

You're now a Lieutenant Jr. Grade. Move onto ship training.