Darth Viscera
Jan 12th, 2001, 02:16:59 AM
Please edit out the post which you made in the stalwart thread, and put it in the battle of borleias thread.
*Hades is in the main shipyard of GMA, as he hears that the ship he will be commanding, the Courscan Sentinel has been equiped and ready for depature.*
You are not in a shipyard. You are at Borleias, in enemy territory, along with 449 other GMA warships. There is no departure to prepare for, as you are already at your destination, and Piett will be supervising the departure to Coruscant.
*He then calls out to one of his officers, can't decifer who. "Prepare everyone for departure, imediately, location, for now, will be classified.*
This is okay.
*As he enters the ship, he takes a 5 minute walk to the bridge, once he arrives, he sits in his seat on the ESD, and tells his communication to keep carefull watch for transmission from the Vice Diktat.*
*He then lays his head back on the back of his chair, and closes his eyes*
*Hades is in the main shipyard of GMA, as he hears that the ship he will be commanding, the Courscan Sentinel has been equiped and ready for depature.*
You are not in a shipyard. You are at Borleias, in enemy territory, along with 449 other GMA warships. There is no departure to prepare for, as you are already at your destination, and Piett will be supervising the departure to Coruscant.
*He then calls out to one of his officers, can't decifer who. "Prepare everyone for departure, imediately, location, for now, will be classified.*
This is okay.
*As he enters the ship, he takes a 5 minute walk to the bridge, once he arrives, he sits in his seat on the ESD, and tells his communication to keep carefull watch for transmission from the Vice Diktat.*
*He then lays his head back on the back of his chair, and closes his eyes*