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MaddWrapper
Oct 11th, 2000, 04:59:19 PM
A small shuttle recieves clearance and lands on Coruscant in the industrial district near the imperial palace. 5 cloaked figures exit the shuttle and scout the palace with binoculars.

DarthMaloSangre
Oct 11th, 2000, 05:12:24 PM
meanwhile inside a palace a young tech is inside the planetary defense quarters monitering ship detection when the hyperspace detector makes a HUGE jump. He is stunned by this jump, but becoms more confused when nothing else appears on the sensors. His commanding officer comes over to him to see what the problem is. only to see the tech. stunned at his terminal.Officer:Whats the problem son.Tech.: I dont know sir i think the sensors are acting upOfficer: How so?Tech: I dont know sir i detected i huge hyperspace disturbance however there is nothing on the sensors. There isn't anything out there. What should I do?Officer: I don't know what it could be. I suggst you should ignore it. It was probably someone coming past in hyperspace. carry on and ignore those jumps until we actually detect ships in the system.Tech: Yes Sir! The radar tech gets back to work monitoring the system no other out of the ordinary events occur. Meanwhile the five cloaked figures work thre way up to TGEs base and are outside of a docking bay entrance to the base.........

BlueMystique
Oct 11th, 2000, 05:20:19 PM
The five are standing near the palace outside of the TGE base underneath a hanger and discuss their plans.
Mystique: we must be swift now lets get ready to go.
as a hanger opens to let a shuttle out the five climb inside and hide behind crates and begin phase two of their plans

Darth Cyber
Oct 11th, 2000, 05:23:47 PM
Cyber concentrates most of his strength and force energy and casts a cloud of dark deception on the group. The begin walking around the base with the appearence of wearing high admiral uniforms they begin searching for something

Imperial Droid
Oct 11th, 2000, 05:32:30 PM
Back on his leave from Endor Droid wanders the halls of TGE base, as a security agent. Passing by the high ranked admirals, Droid turns around. He raises his sheilds, checks his yasilimari, and charges his lasers.

Droid Malay
Oct 11th, 2000, 05:42:06 PM
Malay looks at the droid and emits an EMP shockwave frying it's sensors and shield generator. The droids Memory is erased by the strong Electro magnetic pulse its systems shutdown temporarily until it is rebooted by an Imperial tech........

The Lounge Lizard
Oct 11th, 2000, 05:45:47 PM
OOC: Um guys...Coruscant isn't exactly the safest place to be right now, if you've been doing much reading.

Imperial Droid
Oct 11th, 2000, 05:47:08 PM
[i]Alarms sound through the complex as the emp pulse is detected. Special level 2 dark troopers start marching into the area. These troops have humans inside with yasilimari

MaddWrapper
Oct 11th, 2000, 05:47:21 PM
The maddwrapper moves the droid out of the hallway and into some living quarters and carry on with their search

Imperial Droid
Oct 11th, 2000, 05:52:57 PM
The troops make a legion formation in the hall before the cloaked figures, raising their shields and their guns. Loading their rocket luanchers.

DarthMaloSangre
Oct 11th, 2000, 06:03:14 PM
amungst all of the confusion the doors open in the planetar defense chambers where the young tech had been monitering the system. Within seconds what seems to be Lord Gue and four imperial royal guardsmen enter the chambers. As they do the workers stand at attention. "Lord Gue" walks up to the officer and ords him at ease.
Officer: Sir whats wrong why has the alarm sounded?
GUE: Weve had a security breach, but i believe it is under control now. I wish to tour these facilities.
Officer: Sure my lord
The tour is very short and ends at the controls for the planetary shield.
Gue: this is just what i wanted
just then the figures show true form and appear in their robes and cyber quickly snaps the officers neck swiftly and silently killing him.

Droid Malay
Oct 11th, 2000, 06:09:50 PM
in the hallway the five adirals lose their cloaks and show their true form as five troopers controlled by the darkness The troops are confused and move on looking for the true intruders. Meanwhile Malay has figured out the controls for the planetary shield and deactivates it. AS he finishes Mystique shoots the terminals and malo,cyber and malay begin killing all of the officers in the room. amongst the comotion Madd
Wrapper plants a bomb in the room out of sight and the five swiftly exit now with the appearance of troops that are searching the base. they move into the halls and past several other troops as they move to exit the base.M

Imperial Droid
Oct 11th, 2000, 07:14:08 PM
[i]As the Yasilimari equiped troopers climb out of there fallen suits, the 2 droids hit the ground. Sensors in the control room detect unregistered bioscans in the room. a man trap in the floor activates up to 8x that of normal gravity to hold them captive till autoritys can arrive...

DarthDarkCloak
Oct 11th, 2000, 08:02:11 PM
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Imperial Droid
Oct 11th, 2000, 10:21:31 PM
OOC: Look it up in a star wars techncal manual, its under 'Man Trap' and also look up 'Bioscanner'

DarthDarkCloak
Oct 12th, 2000, 06:15:08 PM
The knights are caught off guard by the man trap and are captured. they are surronded by soldiers unable to move quickly because of the extreme gravitational force on their bodies. Darth Cyber gets in contact with DarthdarkCloak telepathically. " My lord we have been captured we need help". "Cyber you all must do this on your own. all of your training was for moments like this. Use the force and you will find a way out.", Cloak replies.

GuardPiett
Oct 12th, 2000, 06:26:16 PM
OOC: 3 NSDs?? Thats a bunch of BS.

DarthDarkCloak
Oct 12th, 2000, 06:34:05 PM
OOC: not nebula class, but nemesis class...................

GuardPiett
Oct 12th, 2000, 08:18:30 PM
okay, good.

Syndic Mitth Raw Nuruodo
Oct 12th, 2000, 10:12:27 PM
OOC: maybe you should start useing NeSD instead of NSD

Imperial Droid
Oct 12th, 2000, 10:46:22 PM
OOC: Now if you were stuck in the same room as the explosive you would have gotten hurt as well, and as for the reason i didnt reply to it is becuase theres no way my character would know about it

Tourment
Oct 13th, 2000, 05:46:29 PM
OOC:seeing as how you ddnt getvery far from the bomb there is no way the power could of got cut off befor the explosion reached you and if it did you could not of possibly gottin out in time.

DarthDarkCloak
Oct 13th, 2000, 05:52:15 PM
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Tourment
Oct 13th, 2000, 09:47:01 PM
OOC:the fact remains,your nights are s.o.l.

DarthDarkCloak
Oct 13th, 2000, 10:29:30 PM
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Lord Gue
Oct 13th, 2000, 10:36:10 PM
OOC: The same room you plsnted the bomb in was the room the knights were stuck in, you thik he defense network of 1 of the man shieds on the planet would let you go?

Tourment
Oct 13th, 2000, 10:45:47 PM
OOC<img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/images/emoticons/embarassed.gif ALT=":o"> n page one after you planted the bomb you walked out of the control room and out into the hall,well as you walked out the control room the bio scan went off and locked youn place.There is no way you could of gottin locked in place far enough away from the control room not to be effected by the blast.

DarthDarkCloak
Oct 14th, 2000, 08:23:44 AM
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Lord Gue
Oct 14th, 2000, 08:44:12 AM
OOC: If they were stuck in the man trap, like they were, they wouldnt have been 'speeding' away. They would have been stuck in place when the explosion went off, in the same room with them, yes in THAT room. So either imp droid is dead and so are your knights, or u take back the entire thread....

Tourment
Oct 14th, 2000, 10:19:13 AM
He clearly stated:
Sensors in the control room detect unregistered bioscans in the room. a man trap in the floor activates up to 8x that of normal gravity to hold them captive till autoritys can arrive...

what didnt you understand about that????say good bye to your men.

DarthDarkCloak
Oct 14th, 2000, 10:46:41 AM
I have talked to my knights and we have decided to take back that post. the bomb hasn't gone off yet and we atr still stuck in the man trap. the fleet is still cloaked and all that good stuff. I am editing the post now.

Tourment
Oct 14th, 2000, 10:51:42 AM
OOC:sorry but your conquest for coruscant will have to wate a while gue is at work and im leaving to a compitition

Tourment
Oct 14th, 2000, 10:54:00 AM
OOC:till one returns all posts to take coruscant will be ignored

Tourment
Oct 15th, 2000, 10:50:20 AM
::as tourments armada exits hyperspace on the opposite side of the moon to DDC's an uncountable number of transports leave the ships andhead for a location just outside the base::(these contain a legion of Darktrooers lv3 with yasilmari, thousands of battle droids and ~150 technitions)

Base-technition:sir have you been briefed of the situaton down here

Tourment:yes,main priority is to fix those shields,and as for the intruders i have reinforcements commng they should be there any second.

Base-techniiton:we already have our men working on the defence system my lord and i believe the man trap's super gravty is begining to take its toll on the intruders body,we have confiscated there comm's and LS's what would u like us to do witht hem?

Tourment:destroy them,my men have landed and are on there
way.keep me updated on the situation

::tourments armada disapeers::

MaddWrapper
Oct 15th, 2000, 11:19:46 AM
We are we gona do we gotta get out of this trap soon. we cant use the force to protect us from being crushed forever.

DarthMaloSangre
Oct 15th, 2000, 11:21:50 AM
We must use the darkness. *Malo uses the darkness to get in contact with DarthDarkCloak and explain his info. they need help and because DDC is a former member of TGE he is the only one that can help*

Darth Cyber
Oct 15th, 2000, 11:23:33 AM
:: cyber casts the darkness upon the tecnicians he senses nearby. one of them should know how to escape this trap :: Who knows, who knows......

BlueMystique
Oct 15th, 2000, 11:28:23 AM
Mystique and MW slowly look around the room and silently put all of the soldiers guns on safety using the force. If they find a way out of this will buy them time. Mystique looks at Malay and whispers in the native Caracan tongue
Is your anti gravity system operational?
Malay nods and awaits instructions for the escape

DarthDarkCloak
Oct 15th, 2000, 11:35:23 AM
^DDC sends a telepathic message to the Knights^
My knights the man trap you aree in can be stopped by destroying the controls. find the controls and destroy them.

Droid Malay
Oct 15th, 2000, 11:39:32 AM
(After Mystique relays the mesage Malay uses his xray scanners to detect the wiring of this trap. he follows the path of the wireing down the corridor with his scanner and finds the control panel. he points it out for MW who is an expert at gadgets.)

MaddWrapper
Oct 15th, 2000, 11:50:00 AM
* madd wrapper concentrates on the darkness and casts the living force into a guard standing near the controls. The darkness hits his system like a haildstorm on his servos. he is slowly but surely overcome by the darkness and becomes a puppet to do MWs bidding. The other knights Cyber, Malo and Mystique do the same with other troops. The four troops release their guns safety and loose all cotrol as the knights take over their bodies using telekenetic powers. The troop controlled by MW walks over to the control panel and waits. the other possesed troops begin opening fire on their allies. The remaining troopers are not ready for this attack for their blasters were switched on safety and their backs were turned on the controled robots. as this occurs the trooper at the panel turns off the man trap and blasts the terminal. as soon as the man trap is turned off the knights are gone. they are speeding down the hall at about 60 MPH not the max for the living knights, but afast as Malays servos can take him.*

Lord Gue
Oct 15th, 2000, 12:34:19 PM
OOC: Wrong!

DarthDarkCloak
Oct 15th, 2000, 02:55:42 PM
* as the goup is leaving Malay begins to malfunction and slows down to a hault and collpses on the floor. Cyber runs back for him and uses his saber to detach the droids head. Malay had recieved much damage from the EMP Pulse he admitted and his systems were operating very low. Now that cyber had Malays head Malay could be restored and upgraded fully. As the group speeds off again they move alot faster than before using the force to speed hem off. A set of blasts doors stat to close infront of them. They duck under the first jump over the second and run around the third and fourth doors that were closed in an attempt to keep them out of the hanger. While in the hanger the group jumps in a shuttle and shoot out the bay doors exting through the large hole they had created. As they exit the hangar the Bomb in the defenses room explodes destroying almost a quarter of TGEs base. As the group hits orbit Mystique detonates the original insertion shuttle using a remote control. A giant EMP blast goes off reaping havok on all things electronic over 3 cubic km.*

Lord Gue
Oct 15th, 2000, 02:59:04 PM
OOC: Wrong again, you couldnt escape from the man trap still, so your still stuck there

Tourment
Oct 15th, 2000, 03:19:49 PM
1 yasilimari were and are present = cant use the force light or dark

2 there are no gaurds present to take over only technitions which arent carying gunns and the droids anti-grav would of been useless since he was taken out instintaneously by the emp wave



and i was still thnking the shields were down from the bomb that hasn't gone off yet when i posted they were fixing it

DarthDarkCloak
Oct 15th, 2000, 03:57:57 PM
You hadn't noticed that Malay was malfunctioning.1. slowed significantly during escape. 2. Mystique even asked him if his systems were operational. If so he could have used his anti-gravity potentials.3. My escape was a very noteworthy and honorable one and Gue give it up your defenses ae destroyed. 4. Malay lost his character and now he has to wait until he is transported back to Caraca then he has to wait almost three weeks until he can RP again because he must be reconstructed.This discussion is over either you respond and try to save Coruscant or the attack continues. Everytime you make a post complaining the attack continues. You need to stop complaining and deal with it. I didn't complain long and went along with the crappy man trap thing, then i went along with the no force corruption thing, and i also went along with the EMP. My point is all of TGEs posts in this thread lacked creativity, and i have complied with all of your whinning so far. So start posting some quaility replies and you will get ore of what you ask for.

Tourment
Oct 15th, 2000, 04:14:04 PM
OOC:EMP do not slowly dwindle down the machine the emp would of instintaineously taken him out......you are still stuck

DarthDarkCloak
Oct 15th, 2000, 04:33:28 PM
*Cloaks ships decloak and begin a massive assualt on Coruscant. all force open fire on the Planet.*Caracan FleetFlagship-El Mano del Diablo, Flagship-El Mano de Dios, VSDē-Hellfire, VSDē-Brimstone, VSDē-Forsaken, VSDē-Fallen, NSD-Mideon, NSD-Peon, NSD-Minion, CSD-Defiance, CSD-Bloodthirst, CSD-Bloodlust, CSD-Precision, CSD-Torrota, CSD-Radon, CSD-Caliesta, CSD-Devout, CSD-Divine, CSD-Destined, CSD-Dark Sky, CSD-Epsilon, CSD-Allegro, CSD-Encomienda, CSD-Mariana, CSD-Xenon, CSD-Cryptic, CSD-Calisto, CSD-Apollo, CSD-Antigone, CSD-Iliad, CSD-Antron, CSD-Athena, CSD-Cronus, CSD-Dexius, CSD-Fate, CSD-Sucubus, SSD-Mauls Return, SSD-Italas Wrath, SSD-Emperors Rage, SSD-Palpatines Revenge, SSD-Banes Defiance, SSD-Cloaks Conquest, SSD-Gavs Might, SSD-Rouls Vengence, SSD-Thrawns Will, SSD-Gues Vision

Tourment
Oct 15th, 2000, 04:56:44 PM
OOC:ignored,your in base in man trap unless you can prove otherwise...damn just deal with
it we got you unless you can pull off a miricle
Ic:
Base-techntion:sir we heard the prisoners mumbling empty threats at us many time so just to be on the safe side we conducted a scan of there bodys and found detination devices
and belive they have planted a bomb in the compound so we started a sweep right away,we havent found it yet but most of the compound is finished it will not be long till we find it....orders?

Tourment:yes,keep the yasilmari at around at all times and by no means underestimate there powers they are force masters.those yasilimari are very important and just because they are getting weaker does not mean they arent fully capeable of there powers

Base-technition:yes my lord

DarthDarkCloak
Oct 15th, 2000, 05:11:00 PM
You retard EMP damages chips and Malays chips were damaged EMP doesn't fry the robot unless it is directed at the robot(which it wasn't) or if the EMP was triggered by an explosion (Which it wasn't) And like i said ImpDroid is still operational Gue , uh I mean Tourment. And the complaining Continues so the Strike continues.(no comment on your most recent post). Lets face it My timing was perfect because noone was on coruscant, i had a perfect plan and executed it catching you off guard and got off clean. only the most honorable RPer would see that.
IN Orbit
Cloak is onboard El Mano del Diablo when the knights reachthe ship he moves to meet them and congratulate them on a job well done. As he seeMalays head in Cybers hand he knows what has happened and what must be done. The knights move to their stations to command the bombardment and Cloak readies a shuttle. Meanwhile on the surface TGE scrambles to put together what defenses it can, but Coruscant is slowly being rattled apart by the heavy shelling it is taking.

Darth Cyber
Oct 15th, 2000, 05:15:15 PM
:: Cyber deploys warClippers from the CSDs which move to TGes base and attack Landing pads full of fighters which TGE is trying to deploy in defenses. The installments are taken out swiftly slowly thwarting TGEs chances of protecting Coruscant. ::

Tourment
Oct 15th, 2000, 05:58:33 PM
OOC:realy sorry guys just got called and have to leave(it is urgent)gue is already at work ill be gone for a while dont know when ill be back gue will be back probably 10:30 11:00 but not sure posts will be ignored.Again realy sorry

Tourment
Oct 16th, 2000, 05:17:34 PM
Base-Technition: sir we found the bomb,it was in the defence control room hidden in a very precise descreat location,i think they have been planing this for a long time.We have had men examining the bomb very thoroughly and determined it was safe to move it so it was sent to a Bomb Testing Facility with the detination devices we confiscated,there LS's,and there comms.We then detinated it,I belive it was only meant to destroy a small portion of this facility the blast was a farly small one

Tourment:Vaery good work,what is the situation of the intruders?

Base-Technition:you were correct in telling me that these are no ordinary being's,according to our data a normal person would of been near death by now with the pressure of the man trap on them but these indeviduals have been putting up a fight.I honestly was wondering if they were gonna get out and if it were not for the yasilmari im sure they would of,but on the bright side they have all passed out from the gravity and there vitals are slowly detearerating

Tourment:Good,but like i said keep the yasilimari around at all time and be on your guard reguardless of there status.........keep me informed

Jedi Orion
Oct 16th, 2000, 07:31:12 PM
As much as i want gue dead i dont feel this is god mode these are typical,not even that comlex,SW devises these are in my SW encyclopedia.Who wouldn't have there base well protected.

Tourment
Oct 16th, 2000, 07:33:44 PM
OOC:uhhhhhhhhhhh ummmmmmmm i agree with Orion(didnt expect that one)

DarthDarkCloak
Oct 18th, 2000, 04:42:11 PM
Myself as well as the Caracan knights are renouncing this thread and are refusing to aknowledge anything that has happened in it. We give up because theres no beating the crappy posting of imp droid, tourment, and Gue...........

Tourment
Oct 18th, 2000, 07:00:46 PM
alls well that ends well

(terrible to see a remakeable RP'er like you turn into an enemy though)

DarthDarkCloak
Oct 18th, 2000, 08:54:58 PM
*Bows*