Character Evaluations

[Keerrourri Sarrtarroa]

I hate to do this, as its an infectuous act that breeds bandwagon-jumping faster than catching a pokemon, but I think its a good time for me to ask you crazy folk out there how I am doing with my characters. I know I have a lot of em, and I guess thats why I'm doing this. It might be easier for you guys to spot something that I'm not doing right, or something that maybe you want to see more work on...or maybe even something that I just have overlooked. I'll ask for you guys to be as frank as possible, cause that helps me more than a pat on the back.

So, here's the list. If you could, just give me a rundown on each, with likes/dislikes, suggestions, and other comments. Shower me with praise, or rail me with condemnation. As long as its what you believe, that works for me:

Anbira Hicchoru
Sanis Prent
Jubei SaDherat Vader
Emperor Shimi
Keerrourri Sarrtarroa
Cirrsseeto Raurrssatta
Captain Joachim Fena
Wolfgang Schreiger
Milom Sargast
MARCUS v4.0
Guri HRD / Eluna Thals

[Hwoarang]

Anbira Hicchoru-he is very strong and you made a good story converting him back to Jedi. You should keep improving him until he is once again the most powerful person here.

Sanis Prent-you have been doing private, low scale jobs for some time. You should move into higher and more advanced jobs, for major companies/groups.

Jubei SaDherat Vader-start learning advanced Force mind tricks

Emperor Shimi-You should let me kill him in an RP:D

Keerrourri Sarrtarroa-you should take over a planet with the cizzerack (sp?) forces.

Cirrsseeto Raurrssatta-^^^

MARCUS v4.0-well, I LOVE THIS GUY (uhh...robot)


That better?

[Keerrourri Sarrtarroa]

Well, the purpose of this was to get reasons and examples...things I can work with, and not just a tally list of opinions.

[Jeseth Cloak]

Anbira Hicchoru - Excellent character, but I do wish I'd see a bit more of him around... He seems to only appear every so often and all.

Sanis Prent - Really interesting character, but his story seems to have become really routine sometimes. It's like you can tell what comes next or something. I still realy enjoy the stories, but he seems to be static sometimes.

Jubei SaDherat Vader - He's not around that much but I really like the idea behind this character and I think his personality and style are played out very well.

Emperor Shimi - Rarely shows up anyplace, but his personality is somewhat bland and could use some work. Up to now he seems to be a lot more like a machine than a feeling person, but perhaps that's intential and I'm overlooking it?

Keerrourri Sarrtarroa - I don't know exactly what my opinion is of this character. He's alright, but I haven't seen enough of his developement to really comment on him overall.

Cirrsseeto Raurrssatta - I find some of his antics really comical, so I like this guy. Heh.

Captain Joachim Fena - Alright, but appears very rarely.

Wolfgang Schreiger - Also appears rarely, but his personality is RPed out really well.

Milom Sargast - Forgot where I saw this guy last...

MARCUS v4.0 - Weird but cool.

Guri HRD / Eluna Thals - Interesting concept, but since I haven't seen that much character developement for her, I really have no comment on her yet. :)


Hope those were alright reviews... ^_^

[ReaperFett]

Anbira Hicchoru
Not round enough, but a good character

Sanis Prent
Best character at SWFans

MARCUS v4.0
I like him:)

Guri HRD / Eluna Thals
An interesting concept

[GuardPiett]

I wish Shimi was around more, though I can understand his recent lack of action.

[Hwoarang]

I WANNA KILL SHIMI!!!

[Nichos Marr]

You wouldn't stand two minutes alone with Shimi :D

[Reysa Sashara]

you also forgot a chracter :)

[Hwoarang]

yeah, he forgot 2. One he didnt use, but his name was Lord Freeza. The other was Zultan or something.....it was LL's brother or cousin I think.

I could last against Shimi! Well, not in this state, but after I train a little and get the weapons I need, I can kill him.

[Nichos Marr]

Sure you can :)

*Sings Live and Let Die's theme song*

[Liam Jinn]

What about Darth Cell? I liked the idea behind Darth Cell (even if it wasn't originally yours <img src=http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/images/emoticons/ohwell.gif ALT=":\"> ) Oh and I'll post about the other characters later..

[Morgan Evanar]

Darth Cell sucked.

[Liam Jinn]

*gasps*

Fewd is mistaken! Darth Cell was good! Good I tell you!!

[Morgan Evanar]

I stand by my statement, and will further state that he was sucky and lame.

[Liam Jinn]

*gasps again*

He was good damn you!!! Don't make me hurt you Fewd..

[Evil Hobgoblin]

*Sniffs the air.* Bah! Who believes you, Jinn! You're nothing but a drunk! Everyone can tell you smell like whisky!

[Liam Jinn]

Oh..woops...sorry for taking up your time then :p

[Liam Jinn]

Anyway..

Anbira-Eh, I haven't read much with him in it lately, but the other stuff I read was good..Though the robot voice thing? What's up with that? :p

Sanis- Ahh, seems like you have fun when you play him. Exellent character..seems like you were born for him...*sniff* I like reading his stuff..

Jubei- Eh, good quiet Jedi?...don't recall reading much with him in it though..

Cirr- Oh! Not a very bright guy, but funny! I enjoy reading the stuff that comes from him...

Sargast- He's a Rear Admiral, what more could someone ask for? :rolleyes:

Guri/Eluna- Guri is good Fett imatator :) Eluna bad! :mad:

[ReaperFett]

hey Liam, isn't Eluna the one who you didnt know was LL, and thought was really a female? :)

[Sanis Prent]

;) damn I'm good

[Liam Jinn]

Let us NEVER speak of that moment again! :mad: !!! I'll kill you both! Then steal Max Payne from you!!

[SapphireDragoness]

lmao, liam!

did you try and pull a few moves? ;)

[Vega Van Derveld]

:lol: !!!

[Lady DeVille]

LL, you have waaay too many characters.

Your only fault is that you don't have enough time to devote to Rping with every single one of them every single day.

Seriously, I always enjoy your RPing, especially with Sanis and Anbira. Although Anbira seems to have become stagnant...but thats okay! ;) I know you wanted to kill him off anyway.

[Liam Jinn]

No, Saph, I did not try any moves..

[ReaperFett]

thats right, he didnt TRY any moves...





j/k :)

[Keerrourri Sarrtarroa]

Eh-hem :)

(puts thread back on topic)

Anybody else care to critique. This helps what I do alot, so be frank :D

[Vekaar Vekin]

Anbira Hicchoru - This guy has always been my one of my favorite Sith characters. Then you turned him around and made him Jedi. That was interesting to say the least. I like what you've done with him, keep it up.

Sanis Prent - The absolute best non-Force using character at SWFans. Sanis WAS good, but after you started writing in first person he shifted from good to great. Your character reminds me of the movie Goodfellas, how the guy narrated most of the movie. Goodfellas happens to be one of my favorite movies :)

Jubei SaDherat Vader - Peaceful Jedi character, well played. He reminds me of Odan Urr, the Scholar Jedi Knight.

Emperor Shimi - He used to be so cool, but you don't really use him a lot. I'd love to see more of Shimi and his shadow attacks.

Keerrourri Sarrtarroa - He represents the Cizerack well. You can tell he is a hard working character, and his stuff is interesting to read (despite the over excessive use of "j", "s" and "r". But it's understandable, seeing how it's how he talks.

Cirrsseeto Raurrssatta - At first I thought he was a sock puppet but he turned out to be much more. I don't see a lot of him anymore, but he's a pretty funny character. And from what I'm told he's a great fighter.

Captain Joachim Fena - Don't know much on him, therefore can't give a good evaluation.

Wolfgang Schreiger - I've fought this guy with my Vong character :D. He's very Imperial, and well played like a true military man.

Milom Sargast - Seen him around the NR. He's a military man like Shreiger and Joachim. Milom represents the NR well, and seems a little obsessed with war....Maybe that's just me. You play him well, but I'd like to see more of him.

MARCUS v4.0 - Marcus is hilarious, one of the best droid characters at SWFans. He's a compact pink version of C-3PO :)

Guri HRD / Eluna Thals- Eluna scares me :) Reminds me of Daala she does. Guri is an interesting character, but I'll have to read more about her.