Stern
Feb 20th, 2009, 12:06:50 AM
For me, anyway. I'm looking for some more constructive criticism on my writing style and the characters I write.
I've gotten a lot done with most of my characters since their conceptions. Stern is no longer a Boy Scout, Feral has depth of character and a past to visit, Klaus has a personal motivating factor for his relentless pursuit of science. Wei is coming closer to finding out what happened to his family and getting in touch with his Jedi heritage. But they say to never get comfortable and always work to do better.
For the characters I roleplay:
Stern
Feral
Doktor Klaus Heidegger
Wei Wu Wei
Offer me constructive criticism. What do you like? What do you not like? What works? What doesn't work? So on? So forth? Etc?
To all you who read my threads--thanks for reading. I hope you have enjoyed them so far. To those who write in my threads--thanks for putting up with my relentless responses. I love writing with each and every one of you. Thanks of course to everyone who helps me to improve my writing. I appreciate it quite a bit. :)
I've gotten a lot done with most of my characters since their conceptions. Stern is no longer a Boy Scout, Feral has depth of character and a past to visit, Klaus has a personal motivating factor for his relentless pursuit of science. Wei is coming closer to finding out what happened to his family and getting in touch with his Jedi heritage. But they say to never get comfortable and always work to do better.
For the characters I roleplay:
Stern
Feral
Doktor Klaus Heidegger
Wei Wu Wei
Offer me constructive criticism. What do you like? What do you not like? What works? What doesn't work? So on? So forth? Etc?
To all you who read my threads--thanks for reading. I hope you have enjoyed them so far. To those who write in my threads--thanks for putting up with my relentless responses. I love writing with each and every one of you. Thanks of course to everyone who helps me to improve my writing. I appreciate it quite a bit. :)