Dead Novel

[Khendon Sevon]

Well, this project is dead in this form; so, I decided to post up what it once was.

This is extremely vulgar (a la Richard K. Morgan).

Read at risk of being offended:

http://www.roxxu.com/Cataclysm.pdf

Feel free to post up any of your dead projects.

[Dasquian Belargic]

I read some of this. Not all of it, but some of it.

I hope you will take this as a compliment when I say that it was.. like reading you in book form. Not the sexual aggression part, but the coding and the wilderness/climbing stuff.

Are you working on anything at the minute or ?

[Khendon Sevon]

I'm having a difficult time outlining a story that I like.

I was thinking about reworking this by cutting out the climbing plot, making it more about Gray (the AI) and reworking Christine's story, as well.

But, I'm not sure, I might just step away. I like the universe I crafted, and the characters... I just can't build a conflict that I think is really all that original.

Maybe it's time to return to fantasy... I have two universes there that I could write about.

All that's holding me back right now is making a story that is really worth reading.

[Khendon Sevon]

Oh, oh, oh...

While I'm at it, here's a completely dead novel. It's 584 pages (double spaced): http://www.roxxu.com/downloads/LegacyOfKings_Printing.pdf

It's pretty horrible, wrote it two years ago-ish.

Ninja Edit:

And here's a short story: http://www.embracethemyth.com/stories/device.pdf