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Karl Valten
Aug 18th, 2008, 09:55:37 PM
Okay, I disappeared for darn near a month there, but meh, I'd like to hear some feedback on my one-dimensional characters. :p
Star Wars
* Karl Valten/ Lord Inquisitor Valten (future)
* Teleran Balades
* Naomi Lang
* Eric Quinlan
* Jakys Sei'Trem
(I think that's all of them)
WoD
*None
Myth
* Created a character but never got a post in ^_^;
Mutants, Unite
* Arsenal
* Slug
* Pariah
Also the reset was the first time I actually started my own little pseudo-group with Project Nightmare which since has completely evolved into the Office of the Inquisitoriate. I've had a ton of help trying to mold this group into a sort of Spanish Inquisition with a high-tech flair and I'd really like to know what people have thought about the evolution and what might be done to make it better.
Aurelias Kazaar
Aug 18th, 2008, 10:02:09 PM
The Inquisitors have always been the 'hand reaching from the shadows at night to grab you' organization. At least that's what I think they are. I really like how they've been developed into its own little organization that has its own goals along with the Empire's. I really like it.
As for Valten, I think he's a good character. Kind of the classic Imperial: devious, powerful, and proud of it. He's very confident, very shrewd and fun to read. The fact Miranda had to get the "blessing" of the Inquisitors in her rise to Empress was great.
Lang is a great sadistic/devious woman. I like her a lot.
Travis North
Aug 19th, 2008, 12:12:47 PM
Teleran Balades - Who is that?
I really enjoy reading thread involving Valten.
Reshmar
Aug 20th, 2008, 09:36:02 AM
Yes that Blades Guy.... Where did he go? I will orginize a special Task force to hunt him down at once.
Valten scares me!!! The Inquisitorius all together seems untouchable. Like An Imperial Mob. Very COOl!
Estelle Russard
Aug 25th, 2008, 01:31:20 PM
KARL VALTEN: I like this character alot. He is scary in the fact that he holds such unrestricted power through the Inquisitoriate over the lives of others. He holds all the chips. He is Big Brother on your worst day. However, he is not a faceless, untouchable character. Despite the threatening presence of his uniform and Nightmare Authority, you have allowed him emotion and a humanity that is revealed now and then, when you chose. This makes him very readable and very interesting. I enjoy the threads between he and Hera a great deal.
PROJECT NIGHTMARE: IMO is an outstanding creation. It is a force that is recognised throughout the RP Galaxy and it gives everyone a real threat/enemy to build story arcs through or against (directly, or indirectly).
I think it is important to keep always in mind that no power is absolute, everyone must win some and lose some, and I think your Nightmares try to balance this in your roleplays. Keep this up.
NAOMI LANG: Is a very tough cookie. I have not yet seen a soft side to her. Perhaps there isnt one. She never seems vunerable, even in a spar with fellow NM's twice her body weight. She considers herself their equal, and then some. It might be nice to see her less in charge of herself one time. Just for fun :)
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