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Zereth Lancer
Jun 5th, 2005, 10:35:54 PM
Could a mod/admin be as kind as to edit my bio thread in the Databank? I'd like the third post to be deleted, please.

Lady Vader
Jun 7th, 2005, 10:12:02 AM
Done.

I went ahead and copied it here in a quote in the event you would like to save it for any reason:


For those of you interested in the Planet Barask (The planet Zereth went for ninjutsu training) Here is info on it.

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Planet name: Barask
Location: on the rim of the unknown region.

History Recorded by the Master Chronicler

Barask is small planet on the rim of the unknown region. It is ruled by a clan system. In past times the clans where constantly at war with each other. The clan leaders soon realized that nothing would come of the fighting except constant bloodshed and the loss of soldiers. A council was made with a representative from every clan to discuss what to do about the fighting. Many suggested a treaty be made and soon a legal document was created and all the clans signed. Peace reigned for awhile but it did not last long. The two of the most powerful clans secretly planned to attack the other clans

Their plans where found out and the clans united together and with their combined armies they where able to drive the attacking clans away and pushed them into the Beragon mountain region where they still exist today. A long time went past and the clans still where allied to each other. The mountain clans, or the “Black Clans’ as they are called sometimes, hid in their stone fortresses and rarely venture into the lands of the united clans. Those caught where imprisoned or executed

Here I list the united clans:

Clan Ky:
Is the most largest clan of the united and possess the most land. It has the largest army out of the united and has a large fortress positioned at the base of the mountains where the black clans live. Clan Ky’s capital is ‘Scarlet City’ A large city of stone buildings and houses made of a red stone, hence its name.

Clan Opal:
This Clan makes it home on the shores of the Jurgan ocean, The largest ocean on Barask. They catch fish from the ocean and hunt water fowl. There largest city sits on the Tidal Coast, The city sits above the water on wooden platforms supported by long thick poles that go down to the ocean floor and keep the city above the water.

Clan Loh:
This clan lives in the rich soiled land, known as the Ergan Hills. They grow rich fruits and vegetables and are renowned for the fine silk they make. The Clan lives in many small farm villages all over the Ergan Hills.

Clan Zen:
This clan lives in the dense Valendale Forest. They are creators of fine weapons and tools of steel and masters of a Martial art they call Ninjustu, The “Art of stealth” or “Way of Invisibility”. An conventional discipline incorporating martial arts, Special weapons, techniques of concealment, and sorcery. They call the users of this art “Ninjas” and there are four groups of ninjas within the clan, the scarlet ninjas, the grey ninjas, the black ninjas, and the white ninjas. The scarlet ninjas are a group of female ninjas and are experts of with the spear and the short sword. They are also skilled with herbal medicines. The grey ninjas are a group of male ninjas that are experts with the Long sword and Halberd and are skilled in the forging of weapons. The black ninjas are a group of ninjas that utilize stealth and arts of concealment more then the other groups. They use the Katana, Knife and various throwing weapons. There is an order inside the black ninjas called the Shadow Ninjas which is a special group of assassins that are most commonly used as body guards of many high ranking officials. . The white ninjas are a group of the strongest ninjas off all the other groups. The white ninjas are the ones that train the other ninjas. There is about one white ninja to every twenty students. All the ninja groups are experts in the use of the short bow

Clan Zen supplies most of the weapons used by the clans of the united. Their fine weapons are sought after by all warriors of every clan.

Clan Shizok:
This clan lives in underground cities in the Gazak Mountains. They mine gold, silver and other minerals and gems to supply the other clans with such materials. They have a single enormous underground city, hollowed out of the rock of the mountains, called the City of stone. The High lord of the Clan lives in a magnificent palace of stone where has a large vault where he keeps all his treasures of gold and gems

There have been many other clans. Some have joined other clans and become a single clan, some rebelled against the united and where destroyed.

Now let us get back to history. At the time when other planets and systems where developing warp drive technology the people of Barask where still using swords and living in wood or stone houses. Their technology is very poor compared to other planets. And soon a New Republic scouting expedition came by and landed on the planet. The people of Barask greeted them warmly and told them anything they wanted to know. Soon the expedition returned to the New Republic with news of sentient life on Barask

More NR scouts came and soon the people of Barask grew tired of the attention and especially of the space men’s technology. They soon angry at the ships that where constantly flying overhead. They took their complaints to the head of the expeditions. The NR didn’t want to anger these people and did as they wished. They left the planet and constructed a large space station in space above the planet, So that they could continue to watch the people of Barask. Other people soon heard of the planet and visited it. This just angered the people of Barask more. They threatened to start slaying any one who landed on the planet and the NR restricted the space around the planet to all ships

Many more years went by and some people still wished to visit the wonderful planet. The few people of the republic went down to the planet to meet with the council of the clans. They asked if people could be allowed to visit. After much discussing the clans leaders proposed that any that wished to visit the planet must do so without bringing any of their advance technology with them. The NR agreed and built a landing pad on the surface of the planet and people could be shuttled down from the space station to the planet’s surface. Anyone wanting to visit the planet would be checked and any advance technology on them would be confiscated. The people of Barask are happy, the only danger that remains in the threat of an attack from the black clans of the mountains.