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Marceloi
May 31st, 2005, 02:21:33 AM
On a fa flung part of the Galatic Empire, on a planet that few know the name of....

Cold.

That was nothing unusual, a planet that was on the furthest reaches away from it's star to support life would always be cold, the only place beings sucessfully ever settled on the equator of the largest continent, away from the bitterly cold and heavily salted sea. This was a hell hole of a reversal to the usual images of a volcanic and lava blasted rock - instead of hot gesyers and boiling mud, with magma that burned always, here was glaciers and ice meters thick, snow and screaming blizzards that could kill in mere minutes. The poles were a dim dark point never explored, even by the most hardy or foolish, the very air you breathed was too cold, it froze the lungs and bit at the skin. The winds tore at the flesh and blasted ice into the sky, to break and shatter on sheer cliffs and mountains. Even in the warmest summer at the equator, snow could fall along with ice storms that killed produce and livestock without discrimination. Only underground could anyone survive for long and it was underground that was the only reason anyone bothered to even try to eck out an existance.

The planet itself was mineral rich, untapped in it's true wealth. There was money to be had for anyone brave enough to come this distance from the centre of the Galaxy, for miners that could bear the harsh reality were few and far between. Givent he Galaxy had so many beings in it tho, workers were not a problem. Those willing to stay however..... now that was what the company that mined for minerals struggled with. The boredom could send a being mad and many did, crazy enough to brave the surface. No one knew what became of them and no one cared.

In recent years, the Empire had solved the problem - there was always a need for somewhere to take prisioners. Be they political opponents, rebels, common theives, prostitutes, traitors, it didnt matter. The Empire sent them all on what was basically a death sentance. The weak died first, the poor food and the cold crushing their souls and will to live. Not many lived two years. But those that did, they were strong, the desperate. They obtained power of sorts and it was thorugh them the prisioners were enslaved. The company discovered quickly that those who had fought, scratched, killed to a position of relative strength would band up to keep what they had gained. They controlled and guarded the new prisioners, they ran the mines, they saw to it production didnt stop. They knew if they didnt, the Company would simply cut power and they would all die and be replaced.

It was a strange working relationship, but it worked better than anything else the Commissioner of the planeet, Jeg'Fra Twopu, had seen. But it didnt stop him from feeling a tingle of fear when he met one of the 'High ups'. These beings were tough and usually thoughily evil. Twopu knew his only control was the heat and power The Company controlled - he was under no illusions what these scum would do to him if they could.

Twopu had only three more weeks to go on his assignment and he could retire young, rich with the credits he would earn as a bonus for serving out his contract. No way was he signing back on again. Not especially as he looked down at the datacard and seeing again the details of the individual on it.

Tall. Bald. Looked about 50, although the way this hell hole aged someone, it was hard to say. Data card said he had been here 25 years, twice the time anyone had. What he had doen to earn a trip here was anyone's guess. How he survived, well that much probably hinted the reason. Twopu had only ever met this man once and it was not somethign he ever wanted to do again. Even the High Ups were scared of the bald man who never spoke. So scared....

"..That we locked him in that steel room. Yes, I know this. But you want him further locked away?"

the High Up stared at the Commissioner. The prisioner was dressed in an odd assortment of furs and skins, probably taken from their original owners by the blade of a knife. "Yes Twopu, if your not going to just dump the freller out on an ice floe, then we want him locked away tighter"

"How much tighter do you want, we welded the damn door shut. We only ever shove meals through a slot and wash out his crap every second day with a hose. You just cant get any tighter security"

"And he still gives me nightmares. I dont understand how no one can be made to either let him starve or cut his heat, it aint natural, I hear funny things when I have to go past there. He makes me have nightmares"

Twopu would have laughed at how ridiculous this was, but frankly that man in the steel cage could do it. Twopu was careful to not go close himself, not after what happened to the female who had gotten too close to his feeding slot. "I know Shaki, I know. I would love nothng better than to fill him with laser bolts, but I heard what happened to the last Commissioner. I didnt believe that could be physically done and still one could still live"

"It cant. that bastard somehow forced your predessessor to keep living even as his back broke as his head was forced up his own anus. How is he, by the way?"

"Still in that mental hospice. You know, I thought that was a Holoshop job until I saw the unedited medical reports. Shaki, I got three weeks until I can get out of here, I aint going to risk it by potentially annoying this guy. I bet we couldnt have got him in there if he didnt want to be in that room and why he wanted that, I dont even want to think. Now, as much as you want it, that's my final decision, but if you want to go and try to kill him, go ahead. Maybe I'l get credit for selling the holo recording as he forces you to eat your own foot, while it's attached to your leg...."

The subject of their discussion sat on the cold floor, a simple jumpsuit on, crosslegged and seemingly asleep. The only hint of his continued existance was the slow fall and rise of his chest. frost covered the walls and the floor, but ended in a neat circle about 1 meter away from him.

Breathe in.

Breathe out.

Meditate.

for hours on end, sometimes for days, only comign out of this trance when his anger coudl no longer be held off or he was hungry. The simmering fury of the injustice that bought him here kept him alive. He released it to stop him from loosing control, for it wa control that kept him as he was.

Breathe in.

Breathe out.

Seek, stretch out. Connect.

Brea....

For what seemed like hours he froze, eyes snapping open, hardly even breathing.

Lightning. a scream. Blue flash. Death and then it cleared

He realised he was sweating, heart beating hard. He wiped his brow, not noticing the sweat drops he flicked freezing to the floor.

What the hell had that been all about? It was not usual for him to dream.

Suddenly, the light went out. In the dark, he could hear the whirr of the heater also had come off. frownign, he was about to stand, when he heard from not far, muffled by the steel, but still distinct a scream of rage.

More shouts.

He stood now, deeply puzzled. The shouting sounded worse than the usual arguments, but now it was punctuated with running boots thudding on the floors. A scream.

Blaster fire?

The footfalls and other sounds over the course of the next hour became sporatic. He by this time was looking out the slot where they pushed in his food, wondering what was going on. The hallway was dark, only lit by emergency lighting. Even in the dim redness, he could see his own breath and feel how much colder it was with the heaters off.

He rocked back on his heels. What was going on?

Vega Van-Derveld
May 31st, 2005, 03:33:57 AM
The maelstrom of chaos that had consumed the prison had spread with alarming speed. With threats of a riot, spurned on by the defeat of the second Death Star, the senior prison staff had retreated into a more secure wing, leaving their juniors officers to mop up whatever was going on. Every now and then, the sounds of conflict could be heard, before the ominous silence returned.

The communication lines remained silent save for the occasional plea that the guards responded, and gave any sign of their progress. Whatever force was sweeping through the prison was doing so with a striking efficiency.

Through the quiet, footsteps approached with martial stalk. A voice called out in protest, though the words turned quickly to grunts and gargles. The distinct sound of a body falling to the floor followed. Obscured by darkness of the corridor, a figure stood in front of Marceloi’s cell.

“You better be alive, in there,” said a metallic, partially synthesized voice.

“It would be so disappointing for me to have come all this way for nothing.”

Marceloi
May 31st, 2005, 04:41:25 AM
Hours went. The noise abated until the corridor was silent, the only thing that could be heard was the ticking of cooling walls and pipes and his breath. In the tiny emergency light glow, it could be seen curling in a mist. The metal of the floor was far too cold to touch now and he knew if he didnt get out of this place, he woudl freeze, even with ....

Yes even he would succumb.

The problem was, they built this cell too well. The walls were thick and strong, the welds good. No handholds, no exits large enough. A problem, but as yet, he was unconcerned. what was more concerning was that mental image. It was puzzling and it worried him as he could not work out it's meaning.

Even as he looked out of his prision, a small bit of light could be seen. It came closer and he recognised a guard, dressed in survival gear. He grinned, thinking this could be a chance - before he heard other footsteps crunching on frosty floor.

"Hey... gah... gur... gi....."

He suddenly couldnt see out of the slot far enough. He gripped the slot with hands, ignorign the freezing bite, to see the sudden commotion. The guard clawed at the air, his throat, then slumped to the ground, clearly dead. The prisioner, wide eyed stared at the crupled form, before glancing upwards as far as he could, only his eyes and fingers visible if you had etes to see from the slot, nose pressed against the metal.

“You better be alive, in there,” said a metallic, partially synthesized voice. “It would be so disappointing for me to have come all this way for nothing.”

The shock of the voice was nothing compared to the shock he felt of actually being addressed by it. it was unfamiliar, yet.... who could possibly know?

He found his voice after a moment, it was almost liek it had rusted due to no use.

"Who... who the frell are you? Why would you want me?"

Vega Van-Derveld
May 31st, 2005, 05:06:42 AM
“Playing coy, are we?”

The figure took a few steps forward, closer to the door and the tiny window through which Marceloi saw the world. His shadow eclipsed the light passing from the hallway into the prison cell, though the prisoner could see little more than a murky silhouette of his torso.

“For all you’ve managed to survive this long in this… cage, you aren’t immortal. With the power gone, the guards dead and the commissioner… regrettably unable to attend to his duties as caretaker of this filthy drenhole, it won’t be long before each of these cells becomes a tomb.”

For a moment, he paused, allowing this information to settle in. One of the lights in the hallway buzzed and clicked as it flickered weakly.

“However, you needn’t rot in here like the others. That would be a terrible waste, wouldn’t it?” the voice asked, stifling a mirthless laugh.

“All I ask of you is allegiance, and for that you may have your freedom.”

Marceloi
May 31st, 2005, 06:22:39 AM
"Playing coy am I.... the only ones who know who I am are the accursed Jedi, may they rot and die. If you wish for me to believe - and i would prefer to rot in here than go with anyone associated with Jedi - then you had better speak and speak freely. Even if I am trapped in this cell, I can kill you as you stand there. Now speak and tell me why you seek allegience"

Oh, he knew this was no Jedi. If he had guessed right, the guard hadnt died of natural causes. But, how would this one know of where he was and ...

No, surely this being wouldnt know. The Jedi wouldn't have said anything if he knew them. A dirty little secret was this prisioner, a secret the jedi wouldnt want let out. Yet, mayhem had broken out. That strange vision. and clearly, this being knew that the prisioner was something out of the ordinary.

And just how would he open this cell anyway?

Vega Van-Derveld
Jun 1st, 2005, 12:38:40 PM
“And I could kill you where you stand, old man, so I guess that makes us even.”

There was a hint of distaste in his voice now, at the thought of the Jedi. Raised by a staunchly Imperial family, on a world of xenophobes, it had been drilled into Vega’s mind from an early age that the term Jedi went hand in hand with weakness. The degree to which he, and many others on Corulag, had been brainwashed with the Empires doctrines was alarming, a true testament to the power that Palpatine and his brood commanded.

“We are alike in other ways, you and I. Feared and shunned by society. Both of us due penance for our persecution...”

Marceloi
Jun 2nd, 2005, 06:40:30 PM
"Revenge? Is that what you seek and is that what you speak? On who do you want revenge?"

This being was certainly starting to get his attention. Clearly, he was being angled for something and this being was not here randomly.

And that prompted a good question.

"And I would ask, why exactly do you think I can help with you revenge?"

Vega Van-Derveld
Jun 8th, 2005, 03:00:29 AM
Who Vega wanted revenge on was, for the moment, a moot point. “I believe it’s something you also want, and that together we can accomplish far more than we would have the capacity to alone…I can feel your power, old man. The Force is with you.”